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victorianxrose
24 September 2013 @ 10:18 pm
Hey guys!

I know its been year since I last updated and just want to let everyone in on whats going on. If anyone actually reads my blog at all. Mostly, I've just been working, moving, and going to school constantly. And writing, while relaxing, has been the last thing on my mind. Especially since I have come to a crossroads with my main story Barely Breathing. And its something I've been debating for the last few updates in fact.

I will be redoing the entire story of Barely Breathing, mainly because I don't like where its at right now. But don't worry, at its heart its the same fundamental plot.

- An age difference
- Over coming social expectations
- Dealing with jealous/overprotective friends
- Finding that person who balances life

Its just as I got older the plot felt more and more childish and forced. Thus I plan to go through and rework/condense story elements. Plus now that its been several years since I started the story I actually have an idea of where all of the characters are life wise and can restructure the story to work around real life events.

Also, with this reworking I will try and have most of the story if not all finished before I start publishing it. So look forward to December for the next update. Also, I think I will be posting the story to Mibba exclusively from now on. Its just less of a headache. I know some people have been reading it on Livejournal as well.

The really question is do I keep the story page? Everyone will continue to be updated like before, but I will remove all chapters and added the new ones accordingly. Please leave me a comment and let me know your feelings.
 
 
victorianxrose
21 September 2012 @ 10:28 pm


Chapter 32 – Close My Eyes, Hold Me Tight

JULY 20th, 2009 Helsinki, Finland: 10:53 AM

The house was quite. To the point I could barely tell there was anyone besides myself in the residence. That was absurd though, since I knew Bam and Missy were one floor below me and Olivia was in the bathroom down the hall. She was getting ready to accompany Missy over to my mother’s house for the afternoon while the guys were at the bar preparing for the show tonight.

Setting down the guitar on my bed I left the room. Olivia stood in front of the mirror brushing her hair out when I stopped in the doorway. She was attired in yet another dress, which led me to question how she was transporting such a variety of clothes. Then again, she was female and it would probably be better to leave that type of question unspoken.Sit Back and Listen For A Time...Collapse )
 
 
Mood: calmcalm
Entertainment: Psalm 23 1 +2 Remix by ENomine
 
 
victorianxrose
07 June 2012 @ 09:10 pm


Chapter 31 – Tears Keep Falling

Ville’s Home: Helsinki, Finland: 4:23 PM

The room was silent as Ville and I reclined on the couch together. From outside the sounds of the party drifted to us in Ville’s study. Or library, I doubted he actually did much in here besides store books and oddities he collected.

“How long do you think we have before people start looking for us?” My voice was small from where I lay across Ville’s chest.

It had been an hour since I had gone to the front of the house; at least according to the large grandfather clock to our right. Almost forty minutes since Dunn had gone on a walk around the neighborhood on Ville’s “advise”. And, about twenty-five since he had kissed me into a stupor and dragged me inside the house.

You were meant for this life...Collapse )
 
 
Location: Parent's House
Mood: indescribableindescribable
Entertainment: Heavy Prey (Feat. Geno Lenardo) by Lacey Sturn Of Flyleaf
 
 
victorianxrose
11 December 2011 @ 07:47 pm

Chapter 30 – Empire of Gentle Hate

JULY 18th, 2009 Ville’s Home : Helsinki, Finland : 10:49 AM
 
Sweat dripped down my neck as I leaned over the various pots and pans on Ville’s stove. Once again I wondered why I was the only one currently slaving away in the kitchen. I scratched my head through the messy knot I had pulled my hair into, scanning the bookmarked recipe again.
 
“How is everything in here?” Missy’s voice almost caused me to overturn the pot I had been stirring.
 
Scowling at her I went back to reading the instructions. “It would be going a lot faster if you hadn’t ditched me to help the guys. You’re much better at cooking.”
 
She stuck her tongue out and swiped the apron from behind me. “Why do you think I came back? Just to watch you toil away?”
 
“Maybe, who knows how much your husband has rubbed off on you?”
 
Stepping up next to me, she nudged my hip at the comment. After sharing a playful smile she took one of the extra spoons and began checking the progress of the steaming pots in front of us. “That’s saying a lot coming from the girl who’s attached at the hip to Ville.”
 And I will wander 'til the end of time, Torn away from you.Collapse )
 
 
Mood: rejuvenatedrejuvenated
Entertainment: My Heart is Broken - Evanescense